Steffany's blog

  Final Words During this semester I have learned how to make multiple essays, by using different outline methods and multiple approaches in the development of the ideas. I'm certain that I still have a lot to learn and a lot to practice when it comes to the initial stages of a writing process, however I'm now in the right path, with methods like the Venn Diagram, the clustering method, etc. When it comes to the actual composition, methods like subject by subject or Essays using cause and effect methods are for far my favorites. The constant feedback that I received from my professor has been constructive and clear. I have learned to organize my ideas' through a pre-writing process followed by a drafting process that allows me to correct or add more to my main ideas.

  Evaluation week II: During this week's of evaluation, we went from an essay that would focus on causes to one that focuses on effects. The topic of this week was sports from a young age, so I decided to write my essay focusing on the positive effects of sports in children. Sports help children to grow as the best version of themselves         It is important for parents to have their children involved in activities that would help them in a positive way. Nowadays, children are so caught up with technology that playing outside with friends is not appealing anymore,they can even struggle with social interactions because the only friends they have are the ones they meet in online games. In addition to this, children can also be negatively impacted by a sedentary life giving them permanent health problems. It has been advised by multiple experts that it is vital for a kid to grow within an environment that allows him or her to experience all sorts of things, espec...